Saturday, March 15, 2008

Metaphor: God as Father


I Know Where My Father Lives

“I know where my father lives,” she said –
Near as a poem or a warm hand
Safe and close as a child’s
Soft breath against the sheet
Near as this lithesome flower
Bedazzling the new light
Surprising the world with the wonder of her blossoming –
Like every good thing,
Like every well-made child of earth,
Fragile, but insistently becoming,
Delicate, but unswerving in her
Light filled, sun bound purposes.

“I know where my father lives,” her dark eyes said –
Far, far as the faintest fleck
Of waning half light on the blackened brink;
Distant, distant like a vast expanse of continent
That lies between a father and his little girl,
Distant even as the father’s clouded face
That sees a daughter’s need and turns away
Compassionless.

I know where my Father lives:
Near as the loving heart
That, young or old,
Seeks kindred warmth,
Creates well-being;
Distant as the human face averted,
A child’s letter returned, marked
Moved, no forwarding address.

- Paul Martin

(The previous post describes the incident this poem was based on.)

21 Comments:

Blogger Kai C. said...
beautiful!

love it!:)
10:24 PM  

Blogger lance said...
Cool!
1:49 AM  

Anonymous Liara Covert said...
Very moving poem. As Hayden succinctly put it in his comment to the previous post, the first step may be recognizing a new reality. After that a person can decide whether (and if so how) to react. The challenge is to step back and observe without judging.
4:16 AM  

Blogger Carrie Wilson Link said...
love.-ly.
9:13 AM  

Blogger Julie at Virtual Voyage said...
The last line is very powerful in the context.
9:15 AM  

Blogger vishesh said...
that was poignant ..
12:06 PM  

Blogger Hayden said...
poignant.

(I'm waiting for the post you hinted at on vincent's blog).
2:00 PM  

OpenID redhogdiary said...
Wow Paul, what a contrast in that daughters love and the ugly side of the father turning that love away. There but for the grace of God...
3:18 PM  

Blogger hazzbuzz said...
Really sad, I wonder whether anyone really has no compassion or whether there are just different degrees of switching it off, I suppose to be compassionate you have to be able to see things as they really are, and to be able to handle it.
5:56 PM  

Blogger jumpinginpuddles said...
interesting and good
7:20 PM  

Blogger Suzy said...
The pain of a child is unbearable.

Beautiful poem Paul.

Love,

Suzy
9:04 PM  

Blogger Paul said...
KAI, LANCE, CARRIE, VISHESH & SUZY, glad you all liked it -

LIARA, thanks. Recognizing new realities and using the kind of techniques you mention both strike me as important aspects of psychological and spiritual development.

JULIE: I often have a hard time with endings, but as soon as I got those lines I knew that was it…

HAYDEN: Vincent back-threaded me – he may have done something on that himself, haven’t had a chance to look yet…

REDHOGDIARY: Reading your comment, I’m thinking that the poem may have come about in large part through a sense of contrasts. Besides the one you mention, the other main one for me that morning – the first time I’d ever met with Amy – was the contrast between my sense of her potential for happiness with how devastated she was at that time.

HAZZBUZZ: I like to think most people have a large capacity for compassion, but seems like it often gets covered up. Someone touched on rationalization in the previous thread – how Amy’s father might have told himself that his actions were somehow for the best. I guess to some degree we’re all capable of internal monologues that would never play well anywhere but inside our own heads.

JUMPINGINPUDDLES: Thanks, and for stopping by –
9:07 PM  

Blogger Hayden said...
ok, I'll bite, Paul, despite the name of your book, I'll buy. But it isn't out yet, is it?
11:23 AM  

Blogger Paul said...
HAYDEN, LOL, can I use that on my endorsments page? Really though, that's great - ideally I'd have as many atheists reading it as believers. It's aimed at raising awareness of important aspects of lived experience that we share regardless of belief/unbelief - chapter one, for example, is on love.

Just fill out the "Request to be contacted" form - it's a link on the left of my home page, I think the blog page too. It just asks for whatever contact info you want to give so that when the book comes out you'll be notified. I'm anticipating this spring, probably in June.
11:38 AM  

Blogger mistipurple said...
i think, one day, the father might write; i know where my child lives.
12:20 PM  

Blogger Hayden said...
well, given that I'm comfortably atheist with profound DISCOMFORT around religious language, you should see it as a RINGING endorsement, LOL!
3:19 PM  

Blogger Kai C. said...
what are you doing for easter?
5:56 PM  

Blogger Don Iannone said...
Loved it, Paul. Nice job!
6:40 PM  

Blogger Paul said...
MISTI: Hopefully... or it could result in her being the one to change addresses...

HAYDEN: I'll take it -

KAI: The usual... (Mostly bedridden, few positioning options outside of bed and too fragile to leave the house for three and a half years now.)

DON, thank you -
8:57 PM  

Blogger Keshi said...
WOW so beautiful and so full of wisdom!

Keshi.
10:20 PM  

Blogger Paul said...
KESHI: I honestly think I learned at least as much from kids as kids learned from me.
2:31 PM  

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